First Impression {3-5}

Ever since I first opened your diary I've loved you layout. The first entry I read was this.So you write short entries...?

Layout {25-25}

Your layout is amazing. Designed by Diva Designs, it's probably the only layout I've ever seen that is this simple yet so perfect. It matches your writing style to a tee. The colours match, I love the font used for the "Navigate" box and you know what? There's absolutley nothing wrong with this layout. Good choice.

Username {3-5}

You are a girl and you say things. Add a dash and that's your username. Actually, it's a pretty attractive name, there's others I would skip over yours.

Content {39-50}

I'm finding it extremly hard to give you a mark on your content. On one hand, I loved reading your diary. On the other, there were many things that put a stop on my enjoyment.

Here's what I loved:

You are a simple writer, but you do it so well. You can say a thousand things in just one sentence which I like.

You're an incredibly likeable person. I've read too many "emo" diaries in which the entries consist of the diarist updating me on their "omfuckingg cutting scars!" You mentioned you used to cut yourself, what? Like, once? That's good. Finally, someone on Diaryland who doesn't think the fact that they cut makes them cool.

All in all, your entries entertained me. Not once did I get the undeniable urge to retch all over my computer. I was able to read all of your entries without shooting myself in the face. I enjoyed reading about your friends, and your (now ex) boyfriend. You could write about those kind of things without boring me...that's a rare gift.

What I didn't like:

Your entries were just too short. I would find it hard to be an advid reader of yours since it would be a horrible dissapointment to see your name highlighted in my buddy list and find something like this.

Sometimes your entries are pointless (honestly, I don't care).

Talking to your boyfriend through your online diary is so lame.

You stopped capatilizing here. Why? I know it's become kind of a trend to not capitalize for some reason, but honestly, it looks lazy. You aren't giving yourself or the people whom you talk about the respect they deserve by keeping their names (and your I's) lowercase.

Favorite Entries

1 and 2.

Errors {4-5}

I'm taking away one mark for lack of capitilization.

Extras {3-5}

About You, Cast, Pictures and (what I found to be a good idea) a "Places" glossary. Could be more.

Lasting Impression {3.5-5}

I might come back someday if I'm bored.

Suggestions
Capatilize. Holy crap, it's not that hard.

Make your entries longer. If you have nothing else to say but "I'm in too deep" then don't update. It's just that simple. Wait for something more inspiring to say.

That's basically it. All in all, your diary was good. Keep it up.

Total Score {80.5-100}

+10 for creativity

Total Score {90.5/100